Wednesday, August 3, 2011

The Lottery - Shirley Jackson


The Lottery

Posted: July 8, 2011 by jheyehmme in Uncategorized
By Shirley Jackson
The morning of June 27th was clear and sunny, with the fresh warmth of a full-summer day; the flowers were blossoming profusely and the grass was richly green. The people of the village began to gather in the square, between the post office and the bank, around ten o’clock; in some towns there were so many people that the lottery took two days and had to be started on June 2th. but in this village, where there were only about three hundred people, the whole lottery took less than two hours, so it could begin at ten o’clock in the morning and still be through in time to allow the villagers to get home for noon dinner.
The children assembled first, of course. School was recently over for the summer, and the feeling of liberty sat uneasily on most of them; they tended to gather together quietly for a while before they broke into boisterous play. and their talk was still of the classroom and the teacher, of books and reprimands. Bobby Martin had already stuffed his pockets full of stones, and the other boys soon followed his example, selecting the smoothest and roundest stones; Bobby and Harry Jones and Dickie Delacroix– the villagers pronounced this name “Dellacroy”–eventually made a great pile of stones in one corner of the square and guarded it against the raids of the other boys. The girls stood aside, talking among themselves, looking over their shoulders at the boys. and the very small children rolled in the dust or clung to the hands of their older brothers or sisters.
Soon the men began to gather. surveying their own children, speaking of planting and rain, tractors and taxes. They stood together, away from the pile of stones in the corner, and their jokes were quiet and they smiled rather than laughed. The women, wearing faded house dresses and sweaters, came shortly after their menfolk. They greeted one another and exchanged bits of gossip as they went to join their husbands. Soon the women, standing by their husbands, began to call to their children, and the children came reluctantly, having to be called four or five times. Bobby Martin ducked under his mother’s grasping hand and ran, laughing, back to the pile of stones. His father spoke up sharply, and Bobby came quickly and took his place between his father and his oldest brother.
The lottery was conducted–as were the square dances, the teen club, the Halloween program–by Mr. Summers. who had time and energy to devote to civic activities. He was a round-faced, jovial man and he ran the coal business, and people were sorry for him. because he had no children and his wife was a scold. When he arrived in the square, carrying the black wooden box, there was a murmur of conversation among the villagers, and he waved and called. “Little late today, folks.” The postmaster, Mr. Graves, followed him, carrying a three- legged stool, and the stool was put in the center of the square and Mr. Summers set the black box down on it. The villagers kept their distance, leaving a space between themselves and the stool. and when Mr. Summers said, “Some of you fellows want to give me a hand?” there was a hesitation before two men. Mr. Martin and his oldest son, Baxter. came forward to hold the box steady on the stool while Mr. Summers stirred up the papers inside it.
The original paraphernalia for the lottery had been lost long ago, and the black box now resting on the stool had been put into use even before Old Man Warner, the oldest man in town, was born. Mr. Summers spoke frequently to the villagers about making a new box, but no one liked to upset even as much tradition as was represented by the black box. There was a story that the present box had been made with some pieces of the box that had preceded it, the one that had been constructed when the first people settled down to make a village here. Every year, after the lottery, Mr. Summers began talking again about a new box, but every year the subject was allowed to fade off without anything’s being done. The black box grew shabbier each year: by now it was no longer completely black but splintered badly along one side to show the original wood color, and in some places faded or stained.
Mr. Martin and his oldest son, Baxter, held the black box securely on the stool until Mr. Summers had stirred the papers thoroughly with his hand. Because so much of the ritual had been forgotten or discarded, Mr. Summers had been successful in having slips of paper substituted for the chips of wood that had been used for generations. Chips of wood, Mr. Summers had argued. had been all very well when the village was tiny, but now that the population was more than three hundred and likely to keep on growing, it was necessary to use something that would fit more easily into he black box. The night before the lottery, Mr. Summers and Mr. Graves made up the slips of paper and put them in the box, and it was then taken to the safe of Mr. Summers’ coal company and locked up until Mr. Summers was ready to take it to the square next morning. The rest of the year, the box was put way, sometimes one place, sometimes another; it had spent one year in Mr. Graves’s barn and another year underfoot in the post office. and sometimes it was set on a shelf in the Martin grocery and left there.
There was a great deal of fussing to be done before Mr. Summers declared the lottery open. There were the lists to make up–of heads of families. heads of households in each family. members of each household in each family. There was the proper swearing-in of Mr. Summers by the postmaster, as the official of the lottery; at one time, some people remembered, there had been a recital of some sort, performed by the official of the lottery, a perfunctory. tuneless chant that had been rattled off duly each year; some people believed that the official of the lottery used to stand just so when he said or sang it, others believed that he was supposed to walk among the people, but years and years ago this p3rt of the ritual had been allowed to lapse. There had been, also, a ritual salute, which the official of the lottery had had to use in addressing each person who came up to draw from the box, but this also had changed with time, until now it was felt necessary only for the official to speak to each person approaching. Mr. Summers was very good at all this; in his clean white shirt and blue jeans. with one hand resting carelessly on the black box. he seemed very proper and important as he talked interminably to Mr. Graves and the Martins.
Just as Mr. Summers finally left off talking and turned to the assembled villagers, Mrs. Hutchinson came hurriedly along the path to the square, her sweater thrown over her shoulders, and slid into place in the back of the crowd. “Clean forgot what day it was,” she said to Mrs. Delacroix, who stood next to her, and they both laughed softly. “Thought my old man was out back stacking wood,” Mrs. Hutchinson went on. “and then I looked out the window and the kids was gone, and then I remembered it was the twenty-seventh and came a-running.” She dried her hands on her apron, and Mrs. Delacroix said, “You’re in time, though. They’re still talking away up there.”
Mrs. Hutchinson craned her neck to see through the crowd and found her husband and children standing near the front. She tapped Mrs. Delacroix on the arm as a farewell and began to make her way through the crowd. The people separated good-humoredly to let her through: two or three people said. in voices just loud enough to be heard across the crowd, “Here comes your, Missus, Hutchinson,” and “Bill, she made it after all.” Mrs. Hutchinson reached her husband, and Mr. Summers, who had been waiting, said cheerfully. “Thought we were going to have to get on without you, Tessie.” Mrs. Hutchinson said. grinning, “Wouldn’t have me leave m’dishes in the sink, now, would you. Joe?,” and soft laughter ran through the crowd as the people stirred back into position after Mrs. Hutchinson’s arrival.
“Well, now.” Mr. Summers said soberly, “guess we better get started, get this over with, so’s we can go back to work. Anybody ain’t here?”
“Dunbar.” several people said. “Dunbar. Dunbar.”
Mr. Summers consulted his list. “Clyde Dunbar.” he said. “That’s right. He’s broke his leg, hasn’t he? Who’s drawing for him?”
“Me. I guess,” a woman said. and Mr. Summers turned to look at her. “Wife draws for her husband.” Mr. Summers said. “Don’t you have a grown boy to do it for you, Janey?” Although Mr. Summers and everyone else in the village knew the answer perfectly well, it was the business of the official of the lottery to ask such questions formally. Mr. Summers waited with an expression of polite interest while Mrs. Dunbar answered.
“Horace’s not but sixteen vet.” Mrs. Dunbar said regretfully. “Guess I gotta fill in for the old man this year.”
“Right.” Sr. Summers said. He made a note on the list he was holding. Then he asked, “Watson boy drawing this year?”
A tall boy in the crowd raised his hand. “Here,” he said. “I m drawing for my mother and me.” He blinked his eyes nervously and ducked his head as several voices in the crowd said thin#s like “Good fellow, lack.” and “Glad to see your mother’s got a man to do it.”
“Well,” Mr. Summers said, “guess that’s everyone. Old Man Warner make it?”
“Here,” a voice said. and Mr. Summers nodded.
A sudden hush fell on the crowd as Mr. Summers cleared his throat and looked at the list. “All ready?” he called. “Now, I’ll read the names–heads of families first–and the men come up and take a paper out of the box. Keep the paper folded in your hand without looking at it until everyone has had a turn. Everything clear?”
The people had done it so many times that they only half listened to the directions: most of them were quiet. wetting their lips. not looking around. Then Mr. Summers raised one hand high and said, “Adams.” A man disengaged himself from the crowd and came forward. “Hi. Steve.” Mr. Summers said. and Mr. Adams said. “Hi. Joe.” They grinned at one another humorlessly and nervously. Then Mr. Adams reached into the black box and took out a folded paper. He held it firmly by one corner as he turned and went hastily back to his place in the crowd. where he stood a little apart from his family. not looking down at his hand.
“Allen.” Mr. Summers said. “Anderson…. Bentham.”
“Seems like there’s no time at all between lotteries any more.” Mrs. Delacroix said to Mrs. Graves in the back row.
“Seems like we got through with the last one only last week.”
“Time sure goes fast.– Mrs. Graves said.
“Clark…. Delacroix”
“There goes my old man.” Mrs. Delacroix said. She held her breath while her husband went forward.
“Dunbar,” Mr. Summers said, and Mrs. Dunbar went steadily to the box while one of the women said. “Go on. Janey,” and another said, “There she goes.”
“We’re next.” Mrs. Graves said. She watched while Mr. Graves came around from the side of the box, greeted Mr. Summers gravely and selected a slip of paper from the box. By now, all through the crowd there were men holding the small folded papers in their large hand. turning them over and over nervously Mrs. Dunbar and her two sons stood together, Mrs. Dunbar holding the slip of paper.
“Harburt…. Hutchinson.”
“Get up there, Bill,” Mrs. Hutchinson said. and the people near her laughed.
“Jones.”
“They do say,” Mr. Adams said to Old Man Warner, who stood next to him, “that over in the north village they’re talking of giving up the lottery.”
Old Man Warner snorted. “Pack of crazy fools,” he said. “Listening to the young folks, nothing’s good enough for them. Next thing you know, they’ll be wanting to go back to living in caves, nobody work any more, live hat way for a while. Used to be a saying about ‘Lottery in June, corn be heavy soon.’ First thing you know, we’d all be eating stewed chickweed and acorns. There’s always been a lottery,” he added petulantly. “Bad enough to see young Joe Summers up there joking with everybody.”
“Some places have already quit lotteries.” Mrs. Adams said.
“Nothing but trouble in that,” Old Man Warner said stoutly. “Pack of young fools.”
“Martin.” And Bobby Martin watched his father go forward. “Overdyke…. Percy.”
“I wish they’d hurry,” Mrs. Dunbar said to her older son. “I wish they’d hurry.”
“They’re almost through,” her son said.
“You get ready to run tell Dad,” Mrs. Dunbar said.
Mr. Summers called his own name and then stepped forward precisely and selected a slip from the box. Then he called, “Warner.”
“Seventy-seventh year I been in the lottery,” Old Man Warner said as he went through the crowd. “Seventy-seventh time.”
“Watson” The tall boy came awkwardly through the crowd. Someone said, “Don’t be nervous, Jack,” and Mr. Summers said, “Take your time, son.”
“Zanini.”
After that, there was a long pause, a breathless pause, until Mr. Summers. holding his slip of paper in the air, said, “All right, fellows.” For a minute, no one moved, and then all the slips of paper were opened. Suddenly, all the women began to speak at once, saving. “Who is it?,” “Who’s got it?,” “Is it the Dunbars?,” “Is it the Watsons?” Then the voices began to say, “It’s Hutchinson. It’s Bill,” “Bill Hutchinson’s got it.”
“Go tell your father,” Mrs. Dunbar said to her older son.
People began to look around to see the Hutchinsons. Bill Hutchinson was standing quiet, staring down at the paper in his hand. Suddenly. Tessie Hutchinson shouted to Mr. Summers. “You didn’t give him time enough to take any paper he wanted. I saw you. It wasn’t fair!”
“Be a good sport, Tessie.” Mrs. Delacroix called, and Mrs. Graves said, “All of us took the same chance.”
“Shut up, Tessie,” Bill Hutchinson said.
“Well, everyone,” Mr. Summers said, “that was done pretty fast, and now we’ve got to be hurrying a little more to get done in time.” He consulted his next list. “Bill,” he said, “you draw for the Hutchinson family. You got any other households in the Hutchinsons?”
“There’s Don and Eva,” Mrs. Hutchinson yelled. “Make them take their chance!”
“Daughters draw with their husbands’ families, Tessie,” Mr. Summers said gently. “You know that as well as anyone else.”
“It wasn’t fair,” Tessie said.
“I guess not, Joe.” Bill Hutchinson said regretfully. “My daughter draws with her husband’s family; that’s only fair. And I’ve got no other family except the kids.”
“Then, as far as drawing for families is concerned, it’s you,” Mr. Summers said in explanation, “and as far as drawing for households is concerned, that’s you, too. Right?”
“Right,” Bill Hutchinson said.
“How many kids, Bill?” Mr. Summers asked formally.
“Three,” Bill Hutchinson said.
“There’s Bill, Jr., and Nancy, and little Dave. And Tessie and me.”
“All right, then,” Mr. Summers said. “Harry, you got their tickets back?”
Mr. Graves nodded and held up the slips of paper. “Put them in the box, then,” Mr. Summers directed. “Take Bill’s and put it in.”
“I think we ought to start over,” Mrs. Hutchinson said, as quietly as she could. “I tell you it wasn’t fair. You didn’t give him time enough to choose. Everybody saw that.”
Mr. Graves had selected the five slips and put them in the box. and he dropped all the papers but those onto the ground. where the breeze caught them and lifted them off.
“Listen, everybody,” Mrs. Hutchinson was saying to the people around her.
“Ready, Bill?” Mr. Summers asked. and Bill Hutchinson, with one quick glance around at his wife and children. nodded.
“Remember,” Mr. Summers said. “take the slips and keep them folded until each person has taken one. Harry, you help little Dave.” Mr. Graves took the hand of the little boy, who came willingly with him up to the box. “Take a paper out of the box, Davy.” Mr. Summers said. Davy put his hand into the box and laughed. “Take just one paper.” Mr. Summers said. “Harry, you hold it for him.” Mr. Graves took the child’s hand and removed the folded paper from the tight fist and held it while little Dave stood next to him and looked up at him wonderingly.
“Nancy next,” Mr. Summers said. Nancy was twelve, and her school friends breathed heavily as she went forward switching her skirt, and took a slip daintily from the box “Bill, Jr.,” Mr. Summers said, and Billy, his face red and his feet overlarge, near knocked the box over as he got a paper out. “Tessie,” Mr. Summers said. She hesitated for a minute, looking around defiantly. and then set her lips and went up to the box. She snatched a paper out and held it behind her.
“Bill,” Mr. Summers said, and Bill Hutchinson reached into the box and felt around, bringing his hand out at last with the slip of paper in it.
The crowd was quiet. A girl whispered, “I hope it’s not Nancy,” and the sound of the whisper reached the edges of the crowd.
“It’s not the way it used to be.” Old Man Warner said clearly. “People ain’t the way they used to be.”
“All right,” Mr. Summers said. “Open the papers. Harry, you open little Dave’s.”
Mr. Graves opened the slip of paper and there was a general sigh through the crowd as he held it up and everyone could see that it was blank. Nancy and Bill. Jr.. opened theirs at the same time. and both beamed and laughed. turning around to the crowd and holding their slips of paper above their heads.
“Tessie,” Mr. Summers said. There was a pause, and then Mr. Summers looked at Bill Hutchinson, and Bill unfolded his paper and showed it. It was blank.
“It’s Tessie,” Mr. Summers said, and his voice was hushed. “Show us her paper. Bill.”
Bill Hutchinson went over to his wife and forced the slip of paper out of her hand. It had a black spot on it, the black spot Mr. Summers had made the night before with the heavy pencil in the coal company office. Bill Hutchinson held it up, and there was a stir in the crowd.
“All right, folks.” Mr. Summers said. “Let’s finish quickly.”
Although the villagers had forgotten the ritual and lost the original black box, they still remembered to use stones. The pile of stones the boys had made earlier was ready; there were stones on the ground with the blowing scraps of paper that had come out of the box Delacroix selected a stone so large she had to pick it up with both hands and turned to Mrs. Dunbar. “Come on,” she said. “Hurry up.”
Mr. Dunbar had small stones in both hands, and she said. gasping for breath. “I can’t run at all. You’ll have to go ahead and I’ll catch up with you.”
The children had stones already. And someone gave little Davy Hutchinson few pebbles.
Tessie Hutchinson was in the center of a cleared space by now, and she held her hands out desperately as the villagers moved in on her. “It isn’t fair,” she said. A stone hit her on the side of the head. Old Man Warner was saying, “Come on, come on, everyone.” Steve Adams was in the front of the crowd of villagers, with Mrs. Graves beside him.
“It isn’t fair, it isn’t right,” Mrs. Hutchinson screamed, and then they were upon her.
Reaction and Reflection:
               When I read the title of the story, “The Lottery”, I am expecting a story of a poor who won a lottery and changed her life at a glance but after reading the whole story, it was really different. It is really hard to understand the story if you’ll just read it once, Even twice or thrice. You must gather some information about it to be able to understand it well. After gathering data from different sources, I completely brain the concept of the whole story. In fact, I watched of it and also I read an essay about it and that made me enlightened about the meaning. At first, I don’t really like the how the story’s events circulates. I am just forced to have it due to time problem. But, when I had watched the movie about “The Lottery”, it became one of my favorite stories because it really reflect our society and the people around it.
                The story and the characters are metaphorical. Every name has a meaning, a meaning that will unfold the flummoxed messages the author accentuates. For example, the name Delacroix means “of the cross” in Latin which signifies the sacrificial killing of Tessie. Another examples are the following:
               Summers- means life but ironically, he gives death.
               Graves- hold the death of the villagers.
               Warner- the on who warns the residents about stopping the lottery.
               Hutchinsons- a historical woman named Anne Hutchinson who was willing to die for her religion.
               The environment of the story is so gorgeous and nearly a paradise but the thing that the author wants to say is that the environment, either paradise-like or Avernus, has nothing to do with the personality of the people residing there. Another fact is that the personality of the character is not a hint about the characters’ personality. Why is that so? All of them wore mask, mask that covered their devilish face. Just like Mrs. Delacroix, she was a good friend of Tessie but in the end, she do lead the castigation for Tessie. Another example is no other the main character, Tessie, who requested that he married daughter must be in the lottery just to have lesser chance picking the death slip. That represents how a person acts in times of the setting of the sun.
               The story simply wants to tell about the bad traditions, that used to sacrifice one’s life just to have a better harvest, that lessens human’s humanity to human and that change one’s perspective, is a demoniacal culture’s fruit. Those traditions are still existing nowadays such as the killing of baby girls in Pakistan and the suttee or the suicide of widows in India. Those traditions depreciates the value of life.
              The story tells us that we must think for ourselves practically and wisely not in a superstitious way. Life is given to us equally and we must use it for ourselves not for ourselves not for a good harvest. Just pray and you’ll get what you want because God is not vane, He loves His creations and it is hard for Him to see His creations became their own destroyer. We must stand for ourselves, we must be “prolife” and we must try to create a model society, which is the true paradise.

Kwento ni Mabuti

Warning: Hindi po siguradong ito ay nasa teoryang Feminismo ngunit sinuri ko po ito at napagtanto na ito ay nasa teoryang nasabi. Sa katunayan, bawat akda ay maaring naglalaman ng maraming teorya. 
Pagsusuri ng Maikling Kwento sa Teoryang Feminismo
Unang Akda
Ang Kwento ni Mabuti- Genoveva Edrosa Matute
I.            Tauhan
Lapad na Tauhan:
Mabuti- isang guro sa larangan ng Panitikan at malimit na tinuturan ang salitang “mabuti”. Matatag sa pagsubok sa buhay.
Anak ni Mabuti- Anim na taong batang babae na nais maging manggagamot ni Mabuti.
Mga Estudyante- mga mag-aaral na tinuturuan ni Mabuti sa Panitikan at pinagtitiisan ang paulit-ulit na kwento ni Mabuti tungkol sa anak.
Asawa ni Mabuti- mahihinuha natin na iniwan niya si Mabuti at ang kanyang anak para sa ibang babae.
Bilog na Tauhan:
Ang mag-aaral na umiyak sa sulok- isang batang naging malapit kay Mabuti at naging interesado sa pagtuklas sa suliranin ni Mabuti.

II.   Tagpuan
Sa isang pinaglumaan ng panahon na paaralan
III.Banghay
Panimulang Pangyayari
       Isang guro na tinatawag na Mabuti ng kanyang mga estudyante kapag nakatalikod dahil sa lagi niya itong tinuturan kapag wala siyang masabi. Tinuturuan niya ang mga mag-aaral sa Panitikan dahil dito siya bihasa.

Suliranin
          Magtatakip-silim na n gang isang mag-aaral ay umiiyak sa isang sulok ng silid-aklatan dahil sa isang maliit na problema. Nilapitan siya ni Mabuti at kinausa, inusisa at pinatahan. Namangha ang bata dahil doon din tumatangis si Mabuti sa sulok na iyon. Tinanong niya si Mabuti kung ano ang dahilan ng kanyang pagtangis sa sulok na iyon ngunit hindi siya nasagot ni Mabuti. Simula noon, ang mag-aaral ay nagkaroon ng matinding damdamin sa pagtuklas sa suliranin ni Mabuti na pilit ikinukubli ng guro.


Kasukdulan
            Isang araw, nagkwento si Mabuti tungkol sa kanyang anak mag-aaral na sa susunod na pasukan. Nasambit niya na nais niyang maging manggagamot ang kanyang anak, isang mabuting manggagamot. Bigla niyang narinig ang bulung-bulungan ng dalawang estudyante na ang sinasabi ay “Gaya ng kanyang ama!”. Tumakas ang dugo sa mukha ni Mabuti na parang isang puting tela. Gayunpaman, siya ngumiti ng pilit at sinabing, “Oo, gaya ng kanyang ama”. Sa pagkabigla at pagkakilabot sa narinig nay nakuha parin niyang ngumiti bagamat pilit. Ilang araw din ang itinagal ng pagkamutla ng kanyang mukha. Samantala, napgtagpi-tagpi na ng bata ng mga impormasyon ngunit bigo parin siyang matuklasan ang lihim at suliranin ni Mabuti.
Kakalasan
           Natuklasan ng mag-aaral na nagging malapit kay Mabuti, na kasalukuyang nakaburol ang asawa ngunit hindi sa tinitirhan ni Mabuti.
Wakas
          Lubos na naunawaan at nabatid ng mag-aaral na naging malapit kay Mabuti ang lahat at iyon ang nagpagaan ng damdamin nito.

IV.              Mga Leksyon o Aral
v  Huwag kang makiapid.
v  Mahalin at maging tapat ka sa iyong pamilya.
v  Maging positibo ka sa lahat ng aspeto sa buhay.
v  Huwag mong itago ang iyong nadarama dahil hindi ito makatutulong.
v  Laging isipin na lahat ng bagay ay mabuti.
v  Pahalagahan mo ang mga tao sa paligid.
v  Ang babae ay matatag sa mga problema lingid sa kaalaman ng mundo.

V.                      Bisang Pangkaisipan
-          Ang kababaihan ay tunay na matatag sa mga problema.
-          Dapat isipin natin na ang ating mga guro ay ating pangalawang magulang at dapat natin silang tulungan sa kanilang mga suliranin kapalit ng kanilang mga sakripisyo para sa atin.


VI.              Bisang Pandamdamin
-          Nahihiwagaan ako kay Mabuti dahil sa kanyang kinikilos. Sa mga nakasaad sa kwento, sa harap ng klase ay nakangiti siya ngunit tumatangis siya sa sulok ng silid-aklatan.  Naitatago niya ang kanyang damdamin at namamangha ako sa pagiging matatag at positibo niya.
-          Naiinis ako sa asawa ni Mabuti dahil iniwan siya si nito pati na rin ang kaniyang anak para lang sa ibang babae. Kaya siguro siya ay namatay dahil binalikan siya ng mga kasamaang ginawa niya.

VII.     Bisang Pangkaugalian
-          Dabat bigyan natin ng importansya ang ating mga kabiyak dahil sila ay kalahati na ng ating buhay.
-          Dapat igalang natin ang ating mga guro.
-          Dapat maging positibo tayo sa buhay tulad ni Mabuti.

VIII.                  Buod
                Uminog ang istorya sa buhay ni Mabuti, isang guro, habang kinukwento mula sa punto de vista ng isa sa kanya ng mga estudyante.
Tinatawag siyang Mabuti ng kaniyang mga estudyante sa kanyang likod dahil lahat ng kaniyang mga salita ay naglalaman ng mga kabutihan. Bukod roo'y binudburan rin ng salitang 'mabuti' ang mga sinasabi niya.
Isang hapo'y may isang estudyante ang umiiyak nang patago sa silid-aklatan, nakita siya ni Mabuti at inalo ito. Sinabi ni Mabuting hindi niya alam na may tao roo't ang pagpunta niya roo'y hindi rin nagkataon lamang. Pumupunta rin si Mabuti sa sulok ng sild aklata na iyon upang umiyan rin.
Kung anong kadahilana'y hindi niya na sinabi. Nakinig lamang siya sa kanyang estudyante kahit na napaka babaw lamang ng iniiyak nito.
Simula ng engkwentrong iyon ay mas naging bukas na si mabuti sa pagkekwento ng kaniyang buhay, liban ng tungkol sa kaniyang asawa. Iniikutan ng kaniyang mga pangarap ng kabutihan ang kaniyang anak, halata sa mga kwento niyang patungkol dito na ang anak niyang ito ang kaniyang buhay.
wala pang isang taon mula ng siya'y mabiyuda. Sa kabila ng bigat na kaniyang dinadala ay patuloy pa rin ang kaniyang positibismo. Ang kanyang katatagan ay patuloy ang pagningas kahit nilulunod na siya ng kalungkutan. 

Talaga... Lalayas na Ako

Warning: Hindi po sigurado na ito ay nasa teoryang Feminismo. Sinuri ko po ito at napagdesisyunang ito nga ay na teoryang nasabi. Sa katunayan, lahat po ng akda ay maraming pwedeng maging teorya. Salamat.
Pagsusuri ng Maikling Kwento sa Teoryang Feminismo
Unang Akda
Talaga… Lalayas na Ako- Alfonso Sujeco
I.                               Tauhan
Bilog na Tauhan:
Lyn- isang dalagitang pinahihigpitan ng kanyang ama.
Mang Nilo- protektado ang anak sa kanya ngunit labis ang kahigpitan.
Lapad na Tauhan:
Amy- kaibigan ni Lyn at laging nasusunod ang layaw.
Armando- kasintahan ni Amy,
Josie- kabarkada ni Lyn.
Aling Sabina- ina ni Lyn, maunawain at mapagmahal na ina

II.               Tagpuan
Sa pamantasan na pinag-aaralan ni Lyn at mga barkada
Sa tahanan ni Lyn
III.       Banghay
Panimulang Pangyayari
       Nakasungaw si Lyn sa bintana ng kantina ng kailang pamantasan nang yayain siya ni Amy at iba pang barkada na sumama papuntang Corregidor at mamasyal kasama ang buong klase.

Suliranin
          Hindi pinayagan si Lyn ng ama bagamat pumayag ang ina. Masama ang loob ni Lyn sa ama dahil sa nakasasakal na proteksyon ito sa kanya. Gusto niyang lumaya ngunit siya ay nasa kuko ng ama.

Kasukdulan
            Nagdesisyon si Lyn na lumayas ngunit wala siyang matutuluyan at maraming magiging problema kaya’t nagplano siya ng matagal. Siya ay nagimpok, naghanda ng damit, nagbawas ng pakikihalubilo sa barkada, nag-aral (dahil isang taon na lamang ay magtatapos na siya at para makakuha agad siya ng trabaho) upang makapaghanda sa nalalapit niyang paglayas.

Kakalasan
          Napag-alaman ni Lyn na ang kanyang mga kaibigan ay nasasadlak sa pighati dahil sa hindi na sila nakapag-aral dahil sa maagang pag-aasawa o ‘di kaya’y mababa ang grado. Kasabay ng paglagapa ng mga kaibigan ni Lyn ay ang pagtaas ng kanyang grado at higit sa lahat, ang paghirang sa kanya bilang summa cum laude ng kanyang pamantasan. Dahil doon, hindi na itinuloy ni Lyn ang binabalak na paglalayas.
Wakas
          Binati si Lyn ng ama at ipinahatid ang isang magandang balita, pinalalaya na siya nito. Tapos na raw ang obligasyon nito sa kanya kaya’t malaya na si Lyn na gawin ang kagustuhan. Nabatid ni Lyn na tama ang ginawa ng ama at kung ano siya ngayon ay dahil sa ama. Naging matagumpay si Lyn sa buhay at naging masaya at maayos ang kabuhayan. Napagtanto ni Lyn na tunay na “ Alam ng magulang ang pinakamabuti para sa anak.”

IV.              Mga Leksyon o Aral
v  Ang kababaihan ay talagang maramdamin kaya’t ipaliwanag lahat sa kanila upang hindi umabot sa tampuhan.
v  Ang magulang ang higit na nakakaalam ng pinakamabuti para sa anak.
v  Huwag maging matampuhin sa magulang dahil lahat ng ginagawa nila ay para sa iyo.
v  Walang magulang ang nais masaktan ang anak.
v  Unahin ang pag-aaral bago ang luho.
v  Nasa huli ang pagsisisi.

V.                      Bisang Pangkaisipan
-          Dapat nating isaisip na ang kababaihan ay sadyang mapagdamdam kaya dapat ipaliwanag ang mga bagay-bagay sa kanila.
-          Ang kabataan ay sadyang nagpapadala sa bugso ng damdamin.

VI.              Bisang Pandamdamin
-          Naiintindihan ko si Lyn ngunit kalianman ay hindi papasok sa aking isip ang paglalayas dahil mahal ko ang aking mga magulang. Gayunpaman, natutuwa ako sa mga naging desiyon ni Lyn.
-          Nakapagtatampo ang ugali ni Mang Nilo dahil masyado siyang mahigpit at ito’y nakasasakal sa isang kabataang tulad ni Lyn.

VII.     Bisang Pangkaugalian
-          Dapat igalang ang mga magulang.
-          Dapat bigyan natin ng paminsan-minsang kalayaan ang kabataan.
-          Dapat maging mabuting anak at mag-aaral para sa pagsasaayos ng kinabukasan.



VIII.                     Buod
                Ang kuwento ay tungkol sa isang dalaga na pinaghihigpitan ng kaniyang ama at iyon ay si Lyn isang kolehiyala. Napag-isipan niyang maglayas upang makatakas sa paghihigpit ng kanyang ama at maging malaya.
                Napag-isipan niyang mag-ipon muna bago maglayas habang naghihintay ng tamang pagkakataon ng paglalayas nang dumating na ang tamang pagkakataon na yaon ay nasa ikatlong taon na siya at isang taon na lang ay magtatapos na siya kung kaya’t napagdesisyunan niya munang tapusin ang huling taon niya sa kolehiyo itinuon niya lahat ng oras panahon sa pag-aaral kung kaya’t nakapagtapos siya summa cum laude na labis na ikinatuwa ng kanyang mga magulang lalo na ang kanyang ama.
                 Nang matanggap niya ang diploma ay sinabihan siya ng kanyang ama na “Simula ngayon anak, malaya ka na at maari mo nang gawin ang naisin mo dahil tapos kana ng koleyiho at kaakibat nito ay ang pagtatapos ng obligasyon ko sa iyo,” napagtanto ni Lyn na sa loob ng mahabang panahon ng paghihigpit ng kanyang ama ay para din pala sa kanyang ikabubuti kasabay ng pagbanggit niya ng “Sasangguni din po ako sa inyo ni nanay sa mga gagawin kong desisyon”. 

Friday, June 24, 2011

The Curse of the Aroma

  I have never dreamed that I will hear someone calling me Engineer Carlos Crus and that I will see the beautiful top view of Manila on the roof top of my house. From being a “probinsiyano” to a successful engineer, I enjoy my life now. I have a wife and two children and it was my dream family, my dream life.
  A taxi delivered me in a wide savanna and rocky mountain, it was my home town. I saw a nipa hut and beside it a bench where a lady was sitting. From a distance, I could smell the lady and her unforgettable aroma. I ran down to approach her and to see her face but a stone slipped me that causes me to roll on the mountain until I fall on a very deep trench. I am scared but the thing that was in my mind was the aroma of the lady, an aroma that I want to smell forever.
  I woke up in a private hospital beside me was my wife, she was sleeping. I poke her to wake her up. I asked her what happened to me and she said that she just saw me floating amidst of our pool. I remembered the lady and I realized that it was just a dream, an unforgettable dream as well as the aroma.
  Few days later, I started working like there was nothing happened to me. I forced my self to see everything as normal, the moon is still shining, the stars are still twinkling and I am still  Engineer Carlo Crus but deep inside, there is something different, something strange.
  I am waiting for my breakfast one morning and I could smell something familiar but I could not tell what it is. Few minutes later, my wife lay my breakfast on our round table, a sandwich. I asked her if she cooked anything else but she said no. I just thought that it was my wife’s perfume as if she wore it.
  It was my manner to drink coffee in my office during 12:00 p.m. As I stir the circumference of the cup, I smelled again the scent that I had smelled a while ago but I just thought that it was the coffee, just the coffee.
  As I got home, I ask my wife if she was smelling something and said no. I am lying in my bed and thinking what that smell is and where did it came from? I remembered my dream. My first impression about that dream, beautiful, had changed. It became a nightmare. I am keep on thinking about the lady, the mountain and the aroma. My eyes involuntarily closed because of tiredness of thinking about that dream.
  As the days passed by, the aroma stuck my nose stronger. Days become months but the aroma gets stronger. I decided to go to the place where the aroma came from, my hometown. Maybe there I could find the answers to my questions. I had tried to turn on the engine of my car but it seems to be not working so I hire a taxi and I said that we would go to the place where my mind was flummoxed, my home town.
  As my feet landed on the wide grassy and rocky mountain, I saw the hut and the lady. I vigorously ran until I reached the hut. I want to talk to the lady but she refused to talk to me besides, she ran but I ran upon her. Without noticing that it was already the end of the land and next to it is a trench, a very deep trench, I slipped and fall down . I saw her face and I recognized her. I remembered her.
  She is my childhood friend and first love, Martha. We grew together until I discover that I love her. I gave her all, dress, love and.. and.. everything. But she doesn’t love and she cannot give the love that I gave her so I grasp her fragrance and.. and.. I raped her. I am afraid so I killed her. Out of her dead body, I extracted her and made a perfume. I spilled all of the perfume on a piece of her dress’ cloth so I could remember her and after that I threw her on the trench. Now, that I am here, near at the death’s hook, I am very happy because we will be together forever. I will forever have her fragrance and will smell her eternal.. aroma.